very good

You fantasized wonderfully and grabbed the attention of the readers so nicely that it cannot be expressed in mere words.
Writing in Urdu though being an English Literature Lecturer, is definitely not a lay man's capabilty
Wonderful job, looking forward for more!

You actually took me to the childhood literature magazines. Very nostalgic, yet creative. You put life into a dead land. I would wait for more stories like that.

Fantasy genre with naga like creature, fairies and dwarfs are well used in the story. Wish the writer good luck and looking forward to her more works in future.

I tried my best to understand it because it was beyond my expectations. It was compelling me to dissolve my all the senses into it.. kind of a Magic i read. Gradually The fragile cords of my mind became the strengthen knots .I really Enjoyed it. It was entirely a justice to the respective Genre. This is really a priviledge to have these kind of authors with us who enlighten other's inner abilities and through this they come up with their compassions.

Parallel plots are running in the story which are full of suspense. Story is worth entertaining and imaginative. Two worlds of humans and fairies have been beautifully described.

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